Singenpoo

Once a poun a time there lived a family who has a cat. The cat's name is Singenpoo and the boy's name is Scott. One early morning Scott did something strange, he wake up early then brush his teeth and went back to bed and he did thet all over again and again then Singenpoo wake up. She wached Scott doing it. One miday Scott read a news leter then he saw a writing about a competition and Scott want to win it so he did. And he and Singenpoo lived hapily ever after.

Sea World

Last year my friends and I went to Sea World. Me and my friend went to the big long slide. After thet we had lunch. Then we can swim again. At the afternoon my friends and I went home, it was a long way. Next we was lost. Finally we were back home. I like that holiday cause it's great.

Corinda Swimming Pool

Date: 10/03/06
Last Saturday my family and my frien's family went to Korinda, my friend and I went to the deep end and my little sister went to the middle end with my friend's brother in the middle end with my sister. After that we had lunch and then we get to swim again. I like that day cause it has a deep end and I like deep end.

My teacher's coment: I like that pool to!

The Princesses and the Prince

Date: 08/03/06
One day a baby was born from a very kaind mother. And when the baby grow she will turn into a pretty princesses. One day another princesses came with two prince, one is for the the other princesses and the other one is for the other princesses. One morning the other princesses and the two prince was goneand the princesses was sad and then the princesses thought that the princesses and the two prince was not real. On that day she went to the beach for a walk and then she met a handsome prince. The prince was in love with the princesses and the princesses was in love with the prince, then they married and they lived happyli ever after.

My teacher's coment: Excellent idea to write about a princesses!
Excellent describing word!
Your story is excellent Fika. Well done!
Great story!

In Lone Pine

Date: 27/02/06
Yesturday I went to Lone Pine to feed the kangaroos and the birds. In Lone Pine we wached a movie called sheep and dog show I realy like it. It was so fun

My teacher's coment: Your story is sounding excellent!