Fika's Writing in Year 2A

Friday, December 01, 2006

The Princesses and the Prince

Date: 08/03/06
One day a baby was born from a very kaind mother. And when the baby grow she will turn into a pretty princesses. One day another princesses came with two prince, one is for the the other princesses and the other one is for the other princesses. One morning the other princesses and the two prince was goneand the princesses was sad and then the princesses thought that the princesses and the two prince was not real. On that day she went to the beach for a walk and then she met a handsome prince. The prince was in love with the princesses and the princesses was in love with the prince, then they married and they lived happyli ever after.

My teacher's coment: Excellent idea to write about a princesses!
Excellent describing word!
Your story is excellent Fika. Well done!
Great story!

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